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Post by toomuchchanmin on May 19, 2016 12:41:06 GMT
To review, you guys are writing 2 poems about duality. One side would be about your good side. You should have written 1 of them in cluncool during my presentation, and one should take you only 5 minutes to write. Remember, these are 3 line poems!
Here are mine:
The Morning Commute
The lady with the legs so old,
Standing in the bus so cold,
Through heart, to her, my seat is sold
Homework
It's half past nine thirty
I tell myself, I am a prodigy
Boy, homework at 2 AM is crappy
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Post by timmy on May 20, 2016 15:39:04 GMT
1.
Homework in his hands,
But eyes are closed.
God let him be.
2.
Burning puncoolion,
Pen at work
Even at midnight.
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Post by graceyichen on May 22, 2016 0:30:00 GMT
1.
Usually thoughtful,
Usually kind
Usually silence can say whats on my mind
2.
Dark and mortal,
deeds hidden, unconfessed,
I deceive the world and myself.
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Post by jungseunghoon16 on May 22, 2016 7:24:41 GMT
1)
I run to catch the bus that comes through
Oh look! There’s a seat for two
Sorry folks I’m tired too
2)
Feeling tired, sleepy, and irritated
Homework, I feel so devastated
I knew sleep was an understatement
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Post by ETypeRegymon on May 22, 2016 10:00:41 GMT
1.
When the day goes to poo
Destroying everything would be nice
But then, what'd that do?
2.
Whne the air's filled with cheer
I utter to myself
"Time to silence my peers"
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Post by melody on May 22, 2016 14:25:20 GMT
1. Sincere and sedate,
a bit brainy, if u want to debate
lovely and sensitive, ha! checkmate.
2. Heading out home, wearing a mask of a smile,
I chase away the real me with a deep sigh,
The irritating sun, no wonder why
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Post by sunnyp on May 22, 2016 14:44:09 GMT
i used to say
oh people brighten my day
they still do but now in a painful way
heart aches randomly sometimes
as intensely as my rhymes
its a payment for all those crimes
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